you have a great sense of writing and being creative. you explained every detail you could remember, i assume, which made it interesting for me as though i could imagine myself being there.
many classes teach you how to pursue your interests and take it to the next level. you go along and to things that you have never done, or barely done before, maybe just because you needed a little push. its great that you are open to new experiences in the outdoors and the environment surrounding us. we should all take some time from the business world and run away from our personal problems to the nature and appericiate the trees and the flowers, because with the way the air is getting polluted and global warming's time ticking, these may not be around for so long.
i encourage you to take some time apart from school and work and experience the nature as it may ease your mind and freshen your mind.
great essay
Yasaman Ke.
sac state, envs D. Mannahan